Q. ar ámen apsenë úcaremmar “and forgive us our trespasses”
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The seventh line of Átaremma, Tolkien’s Quenya translation of the Lord’s Prayer. The first word is ar “and”, followed by a combination of the imperative particle á and the (dative) second person plural pronoun men “[for] us”. Next follows apsene, the aorist form of the verb apsen- “forgive”. The final word úcaremmar “our trespasses” is the first person plural exclusive possessive form of úcarë, with the usual plural suffix -r indicating the possessed noun was also plural (“trespasses” as opposed to “trespass”).
Decomposition: Broken into its constituent elements, this phrase would be:
ar á-me-n apsenë úcare-mma-r = “*and (imperative)-us-for forgive trespass-our-(plural)”
Conceptual Development: Earlier versions of the prayer used a different verb avatyar- for “forgive”, in what was probably a suffixed imperative form avatyara (I-IIa) or ávatyara (IIb-IV). In version I-IV, this was followed by the ablative form mello “[from] us” of the pronoun me.
Earlier versions of the prayer used a variety of words for “trespass”: lucassë (I), lucië (IIa-IIb), luhta (III-IV deleted) and rohta (III-IV). Most instances used the same possessive suffix -mma² “our” as the final verion of the prayer, but version III used an independent pronoun menya, in its plural form menye to agree with the plural noun “trespasses”.
| I | IIa | IIb | III | IV | V | VI |
|---|---|---|---|---|---|---|
| ar | ||||||
| avatyara | ávatyara | ámen | ||||
| mello | apsene | |||||
| lucassemmar | i luciemmar | menye {luhtar >>} rohtar | {luhtammar >>} rohtammar | úcaremmar | ||
References ✧ VT43/8-12
Variations
Elements
| ar | “and” | ✧ VT43/18 | |
| á | “imperative particle” | ✧ VT43/19 | |
| me | “us, we (exclusive)” | dative | ✧ VT43/19 (mello); VT43/19 (men) |
| #apsen- | “to remit, release, forgive” | aorist | ✧ VT43/18 (apsene) |
| #úcarë | “*sin, debt, trespass” | 1st-pl-exclusive-poss plural | ✧ VT43/19 (úcaremmar) |
| #lucassë | “*debt, trespass” | 1st-pl-exclusive-poss plural | ✧ VT43/19 (lucassemmar) |
| #avatyar- | “*to forgive, (lit.) do away with” | imperative | ✧ VT43/18 (avatyara); VT43/18 (ávatyara) |
| i¹ | “the” | ✧ VT43/19 | |
| #lucië | “*debt, trespass” | 1st-pl-exclusive-poss plural | ✧ VT43/19 (luciemmar) |
| menya | “*our (emphatic possessive exclusive)” | plural | ✧ VT43/19 (menye) |
| #luhta | “*debt, trespass” | plural | ✧ VT43/19 (luhtar); VT43/19 (luhtammar) |
| #rohta | “*debt, trespass” | plural | ✧ VT43/19 (rohtar); VT43/19 (rohtammar) |
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